Persuasive Speech

 

WALT: We are learning to write a persuasive piece for a speech.

I started to write about my experience in Covid 19 lockdown.

Tena koutou tena koutou Tena koutou katoa ko Shyloh

toku ingoa.

• Attention Grabber

• Story - A story that connects to your speech topic

This is a short story about my experience in Covid 19,

it was so fun because I got to bake

chocolate chip cookies all by myself.

• Introduction

• State your opinion - You can give your

• main point on your topic

My favourite thing about lockdown is that

I got to bake a lot. 

• The body of your speech -

• 3 reasons - Give  3 reasons for your opinion

• and explain them in detail

• Biking on the BIG field

• I love cooking allon

• Staying in my room cold when there was

• power cut

Conclusion -

• Summarise your opinion one more time

My favourite thing about lockdown is that

I got to bake a lot.

Gem of the First Water

WALT: We are learning to build a picture use the book called Gem of the First Water using google draw.

 

Whitebait conection

WALT: We are learning to be kaitiaki in our community.

Questions:


1.  Are we going on the bus?
2.  What are we bringing?
3. Who are we going with?
 4. Where are we walking?
 5. How are the gem lake is connected?

These are questions that I did with Whaea Nena.


Did you have questions with Whaea Nena?

WALT: We are learning about who and what helps us learn.

My learning map shows my aunts uncles mum and dad can help me with my home learning.

Drawing also helps me get better at coloring. It helps me learn by staying in the lines.

It was easy because we had to take a pitcher of our learning maps. Today was not hard for me I just gave it a go.

Do you have a learning map at home?

My Holiday

WALT: We are learning to write edit and  recraft our writing.

To write my story I made a plan at the top of the page. Then I wrote my story underneath. The green writing shows the editing I have done and the red parts show what Mr Masters helped me with.   

Writing

In the holidays I went fishing at the worf. M y cousins Blake,

                                                                    Wharf    M

Wade and Julien^ catch too Kingy's, one Snapper and one

                            They   caught

‘spikfish’.  The Kingy’s were 8 kilos^that was bigger than the

  SpikeyFish                                           but

Snapper. The fish  smells so fishy^ I did not like that smell it

                                   Smelt                   and

Isgross. the squid was so squishy too.  I went with my

Was        T

cousins, Dad, Mum, Zion and Tyson. It was such a fun week

because I get to swim in the deep and have bikies. When I got

                   Got                                                               bikies

out^ I was all wet and slippery with sop.      

                                                          Soap

Wharf       Spikeyfish        smelt bikies was      got soap

too

Reflection: It was complicated because I did not no what the carrots meant.

Question: What did you do in the holidays.