Under the bed

WALT: We are learning to use descriptive vocab in our writing. 

This is work I have written and edited myself. It is still a work in progress.  

One night under the bed I saw a monster crawling pass my teddy’s I screamed very loud and I shouted DAD! There's a monster under my bed it was scary with red eyes. My dad had to look for it but it slipped away out of the window. The next night the monster came back into my room again I went in dad’s room and he wasn’t there I found dad on the couch sleeping I was all alone when the monster hunted me. I didn't know what to do when my dad was asleep. But then there was a noise in the kitchen and finally he woke up. He caught it with his bare hands it was saw because it had spik’s. The monster never gave up and every night he keeps coming and coming. But then he brought friends over they were in the cobid and also the fridge. I tried to stay brave but I can’t. 

This was easy because it’s just like a scary story.

What was your favorite part of the story?