All about me

WALT. We are learning to describe ourselves to others.

All About Me……...

Hi my name is Shyloh . My favourite food is Mcdonalds and KFC. My ourite cat is Oly-J, he is the best cat in the world. My favourite animals are Tigers and baby Lions. Baby Lions are so cute. When I went to the park I played on the bars but I got blisters. At the movies my family went to watch The Hidden World. It is the best movie ever. My favourite sport is Netball. I always practise netball at home. And  that's all about me.

I did't like anything. It was boring.

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