Kia Ora. I am a Year 6 student in Te Kauru at Paparore School. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
Thursday, September 10, 2020
GIANT PIZZA
Friday, August 14, 2020
Persuasive Speech
WALT: We are learning to write a persuasive piece for a speech.
I started to write about my experience in Covid 19 lockdown.
Tena koutou tena koutou Tena koutou katoa ko Shyloh
toku ingoa.
Attention Grabber
Story - A story that connects to your speech topic
This is a short story about my experience in Covid 19,
it was so fun because I got to bake
chocolate chip cookies all by myself.
Introduction
State your opinion - You can give your
main point on your topic
My favourite thing about lockdown is that
I got to bake a lot.
The body of your speech -
3 reasons - Give 3 reasons for your opinion
and explain them in detail
Biking on the BIG field
I love cooking allon
Staying in my room cold when there was
power cut
Conclusion -
Summarise your opinion one more time
My favourite thing about lockdown is that
I got to bake a lot.